It's going to need a lot of editing to match up timelines, seasons, weather, and so on, but basically I am fairly happy with it. I've snuck in most of the things I wanted. I don't think I write women very well, and they got squeezed out of this, more or less, and perhaps I missed having an "ex-Special-Forces" type person with a load of macho gimmicks, etc.
Having fun killing off baddies, and the top baddie I feel needs to be humiliated, rather than killed. There's a certain glee for a mild-mannered person in being nasty...
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